Comments on: Getting The Hang Of Past And Present http://galacticwriter.com/getting-the-hang-of-past-and-present/ A blog about creative writing Wed, 08 Apr 2009 03:10:50 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: Thom Allen http://galacticwriter.com/getting-the-hang-of-past-and-present/comment-page-1/#comment-7 Thom Allen Sun, 04 Jan 2009 04:08:36 +0000 http://galacticwriter.com/getting-the-hang-of-past-and-present/#comment-7 I think I suffer from just the opposite. I find myself writing a whole bunch of little sentences. Again, this is a habit I need to break. I should use words to help move the conversation along and not sentence length. Welcome to my site, hope you come back again. I think I suffer from just the opposite. I find myself writing a whole bunch of little sentences. Again, this is a habit I need to break. I should use words to help move the conversation along and not sentence length.

Welcome to my site, hope you come back again.

]]> By: pardes http://galacticwriter.com/getting-the-hang-of-past-and-present/comment-page-1/#comment-6 pardes Sun, 04 Jan 2009 03:36:42 +0000 http://galacticwriter.com/getting-the-hang-of-past-and-present/#comment-6 I struggle with sentences that end up being a paragraph long. They just go on and on and on.... Structurally they are grammatically correct (well most of the time) and I do mix in shorter sentences but it seems to be the natural rhythm of my brain to think in lonnnnnnng sentences. MS Word grammar checker has a coronary every time I use it. I struggle with sentences that end up being a paragraph long. They just go on and on and on….
Structurally they are grammatically correct (well most of the time) and I do mix in shorter sentences but it seems to be the natural rhythm of my brain to think in lonnnnnnng sentences. MS Word grammar checker has a coronary every time I use it.

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